My Favourite Restaurant
This week you are going to be creating a recount all about your favourite restaurant. Think about all of the things you did getting to the restaurant and being at the restaurant.
Planning
| Order |
Planning notes |
| Intro: 5Ws |
Who: My Mum and I.
What:Going to eat KFC.
When: On Friday in week.
Where: At KFC.
Why: To go have lunch. |
| Paragraph 1 |
Getting picked up from school. |
| Paragraph 2 |
Driving to KFC. |
| Paragraph 3 |
Going to KFC and getting food. |
| Conclusion |
I felt happy because we were going to go eat and because I got picked up from school early. |
Now that you have finished your plan, start writing your story. Don’t forget:
- Who, what, when, where, why to introduce the event.
- Write it in an order of events.
- Be descriptive, share as many details as you can.
- Use correct sentence punctuation, and try experimenting with others.
- Group your ideas into paragraphs.
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Start your writing here:
→ On Friday my Mum picked me up early from school to start packing to go up north. But after we packed we went to KFC.
Paragraph 1. At 1:30 on Friday my nan came to the field to pick me up to go to start packing up for Up North. After I got all my things we were all going to get in the car to start dropping off my siblings to my aunties house. When we got in the car my siblings had to get their clothes for the weekend. After we got their clothes my nan dropped us to my mum so she could drop us off. My first sibling wanted to go to my aunty at the park and when we got there all of the rest of my siblings wanted to stay too. After we dropped them off we needed to get their bags out of the car and put it in my aunties car. After we dropped them off I felt really happy because I did not have to stay with them.
Paragraph 2: The last thing we did after we dropped them off we got on to the Motor Way. When we got on the Motor Way we saw that there was a lot of traffic so we needed to stay in the car and wait until it died down. After it died down we went to my Nan’s house. But on the way we wanted to eat so we were deciding in the car what to eat. Then I asked my Mum if we could get KFC for lunch. So while we were on the Motor Way we waited until we got to the KFC closer to my Nan’s house. While we were waiting until we got to KFC I felt happy because we were going to my favourite place.
Paragraph 3: When we got to KFC we were waiting to get served. While we were waiting we looked at the menu and tried to decide what we were going to order. When we were looking at the menu I saw the lunch box I think it is called and I said ,“ Can I have this for lunch please Mum?” My Mum said, “ Okay .” When we got to the drive through we said what we wanted. After we ordered we made our way to the next window to pay for the food. When we got there we had to wait for the lady to get it ready for us to pay. The next thing we did after we paid was wait for them to give us the food. The second thing we did after we got our food was make our way to my Nan’s house to eat. After we ate we packed to make our Up North. While we were eating I felt happy because I was hungry.
Conclusion: Through the day I felt really happy because KFC has a big variety of different food to eat when we go. For Example ( If you do not like spicy food you can get normal chicken with gravy and potatoes.) Have you ever been to KFC?